WALT write an interesting piece using 5 words in only 100 words.
100 word challenge
It was my birthday soon. I was turning 10 years old so I checked my calendar... it was next week! I woke up on my birthday to presents on the end of my bed. I was so excited! I went to my parents and asked "can I open my presents?" they said "yes". So I opened my presents. There was a minuscule bug in one. In the next present there was a sticky box of slime. The third was a white jacket. The jacket had a stain on it, so we put it in the washing machine and it was rotating for a long time when suddenly...
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ReplyDeleteI like that you have described what was inside each of the presents. Next time make sure you check your punctuation.
Cool blog Kael I liked the part when you said I woke up to my presents on the end of my bed.I like how you use your capital letters .Here's some feed back. I think you need to work on your spelling and grammar.
ReplyDeleteGreat story Kael, I love your use of the word 'miniscule '. Very discriptive. Just remember to read back over what you've written to help with your spelling. I really want to know what happens to your jacket!
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